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Two With One Stone 2003-08-03 . chapter 1
Honestly, Ky. You'd think you could do a bit better then that. You LIVED it, didn't you? Well, I guess you didn't really, considering it's coming from HIS pov. I don't understand why you didn't tell it from your pov... Wait, it would only be a few words... Bite me... Hehe. Okay, it was good, but not the best, though, you did put the ever-lovely "Be loved" spin on it that makes women melt into puddles of goo.
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