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| Estelle Stafford 2005-11-14 ch 6,   | I really enjoyed it, very good! |
| estelle stafford 2004-11-28 ch 8, | Well, I'll read nine some other time. Keep up the good work. The characters are well developed, which makes up for the desription of the background, there is no need for it. This is really good, well written. I can't think of too many things that need improving, if any. your friendestelle Stafford |
| Lisa 2004-11-12 ch 8, | what a total jerk nikolae is. he reminds me of a russian KGB or something with his attitude. gr. cute chapter tho. i hope he ends up changing them laws! |
| celebra 2004-11-10 ch 8, | yay. two new stories to follow in one night! good story, and please update again soon, I'm anxious to know the 'fate of the nation'. |
| moi 2004-11-10 ch 8, | o! good story so far ^_^ |
| Raine0211 2004-11-06 ch 7, | Hey girl, finally got through. Great chappie. we'll see how long that little girlie lasts against his wily charms. But will he like her for more than her looks? Will he be willing to change the law? Anywho, I hope deanna gets with ruben. i like her. :-D Write more soon girlie. ~Love your biggest fan, fellow author and forever friend, Lisa~ |
| N Ashton 2004-11-06 ch 7, | interesting concept and it's been well written. please update soon! |
| Romantic 2004-07-02 ch 6, | mighty long chapter..will your next one be able to top it? hmm lots of tensions swirling between those two. what is to come should be very interesting ps..in your summary is say in a world were segregation is unlawful..shouldnt it lawful but ya update soon |
| Raine0211 2004-06-10 ch 6, | Hey girlie. Pretty good chapter. Don't worry about the lack of updating. The only thing I updated was all over a girl a week or so ago and you KNOW how many stories I have. You are not making the web of deceit and intrigue a bit more tangled and its definitely making the plot pick up in pace. it's nifty. write more soon. ~Lisa~ |
| Raine0211 2003-12-22 ch 5, | OH NO I DIDN'T REVIEW. I'm a bad person. Haha. So yes, very sensual chapter. Good job. I liked how they were unable to resist. Its super realistic. Sorry for not revieweing before. I could have sworn...grr. Great job. write more. ~Your fellow writer and forever friend, Lisa~ |
| Tina 2003-08-23 ch 5, | this is your first flame. first of all this is a damn good story. i love it i cant get enough of it. hehehe so who is at the door, i wonder. i love the tension that you create between the two. and love the class tension and how ironically her sister got in trouble for that. please please update soon ur first flamer ROMANTIC CHIC |
| Jaden Anderson 2003-08-23 ch 5, | YOU DON"T SUCK AT WRITING!! GRR! LoL... This was a great chapter and man what a cliffhanger! I liked the way you built their passion up... and the way the slave in the kitchen talked to her! it was great!! AWESOME CHAPTER! I LOVED IT!! heheh and thanks for the special note to me... I blushed... hehe DAMON'S MINE! *roars* LoL. ~*Jaden Anderson*~ |
| Ashlita 2003-08-23 ch 5, | Thanks for the publicity. :-D but that was evil how you left it! Ashley wants to know who walked in! And Ashley wants to know now. :) But, the chappie didn't suck. If you keep saying that, Imma have to kick your arse or do something. Yea, so update soon! ~Ashlita |
| Tragedy is Love 2003-08-22 ch 5, | okay, please update soon. i love ur story. romantic chic advised me to read this story so yep. love it! |
| Jaden Anderson 2003-08-20 ch 4, | bittersweet much? Lol GREAT WORK GURL! ~*Jaden Anderson*~ |