Oh that was beautiful. I just love the imagery. The part where she killed herself was dark, but I'm glad it did have a happy ending! _

wow, what an awesome poem. it kinda took me by surprise. but the ending was quite good. i love this!. keep writin -Spaz

hey . check out my work will you plz ? .. and now about ur poem .. thiss was beautiful ! .. yett i preferred that she hadnt died .. lols .. okay bye !

Wow. This is really beautiful. Tells a wonderful story. I feel for that little girl. So isolated, then for a brief moment happy. And the only way to find happiness again is death. So powerful.

On another Note, thanks for r/r my poems. You made me very happy. And I found a wonderful new author to read. Your Only 13? All I have to say to that is you have talent.

You arent the only one who really likes this poem...its been a while since you put things up...good to see it wasnt wasted time...such a sad poem...but at the same time its slightly uplifting...fantastic...dont keep me waiting for more

aww...that was really sweet. I liked the story it told *smiles* good job.

bye *disappears*