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| teh tarik 2003-08-31 ch 1, | Oh that was beautiful. I just love the imagery. The part where she killed herself was dark, but I'm glad it did have a happy ending! ^_^ |
| spazticpoetgrl 2003-08-10 ch 1, | wow, what an awesome poem. it kinda took me by surprise. but the ending was quite good. i love this!. keep writin -Spaz |
| mzNEEDA 2003-08-08 ch 1, | hey . check out my work will you plz ? .. and now about ur poem .. thiss was beautiful !! .. yett i preferred that she hadn`t died .. lols .. okay bye ! |
| Cass 2003-08-03 ch 1, | Wow. This is really beautiful. Tells a wonderful story. I feel for that little girl. So isolated, then for a brief moment happy. And the only way to find happiness again is death. So powerful. On another Note, thanks for r/r my poems. You made me very happy. And I found a wonderful new author to read. Your Only 13? All I have to say to that is you have talent. |
| A Phantom Stranger 2003-08-03 ch 1, | You arent the only one who really likes this poem...its been a while since you put things up...good to see it wasnt wasted time...such a sad poem...but at the same time its slightly uplifting...fantastic...dont keep me waiting for more |
| Special Ed 2003-08-02 ch 1, | aww...that was really sweet. I liked the story it told *smiles* good job. bye *disappears* |