Hi! *huggles Silva* It's me, Nightbird*Songbird, cept I have a different name. *shibby dance*
Men ARE gits, dear~, but don't forget that they've been raised to be violent gits, so it's not completely their fault. *pats on head* Poor Crumpet, have a peeps bunny.
~ except the gay ones
Anyways, I hope you're better now.

hu eva that is a bastard
seriously is
men are gits
rite on!

Dante, if you are reading this, then you had better know that there is a girl who hates you almost as much as Elfie does out there, and its me. Elfie, your poem explained so much and i want you to know i am here for you. Stay strong hunni. i love you!

good poem! interesting ending...

i didn't lie. i loved you, & i still do. don't you think i must be lost & confused, with what happened?

& just so you know, you shouldn't have sent you midget friend after me. she'll regret doing what she did.

-dante

ok that expressed some really strong emotions which is really good. it was something that i think alot of girls can relate to and you're very brave writing about it nonetheless you write about it very well and the poem has a really good rhythm to it. i likes it alot- 2 thumbs up keep writing

Good poem, but hey, not all of us men are bastards! Some of us are idiots too! Wait... that's not what I mean to say...

i love how this rhymes and flows! all i can say is WHOA, i can relate. A while ago I got stumped and it realy screwed my trust. Hope everythings going well. Keep up the good work