i really like this poem, very easy to visualize.
sarah wild
(p.s, feel free to review any of my writing)

very good, I love it!

Of all the authors I review on a regular basis, you are by far my favorite. As I open every new poem, I know that it will be something worth gushing about. I probobly sounds like an over-excited teeny bopper in all of my reviews, but i just can't help it. You are proof to the saying that I've never believed in: "Some things just get better and better." I'll have to make an exception and believe it for you.

Swinging in a bag with me,
Containing my life memories.
I know if I look back,
All I will see,
Is no one chasing after me.

The symbolism of it all is so powerful. I like how you seemed not to care that No one was chasing afater you, but somehow the reader gets the message that it's bigger than you made it.

I don't know if that made any sence what so ever.

You have outdone yourself as usual,

Bianca

umm its good? ya it is but its kinda odd no offence im sure it makes sence in ur mind!

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