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| Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful! I love how true that was. Its just like humans. Babies are so pure and as soon as they are released to the real world - everything starts to taint them. Makes you upset doesn't it? Nice piece! |
| poetic abortion 2005-01-25 ch 1, | abuse=( Beautiful. You have inspired me with this !! XD Beautiful bautiful poem. Absoloutly stunning. ~* Noelle *~ |
| Lin Winter 2004-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI love your writing style. It's simply beautiful. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI love all the devices you've used here, particularly the second stanza (1-2-3-4-5). This subject isn't new, but you've given it a fresh treatment, which is refreshing. ~lyv |
| Jimmy Jazz 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was fantastic! I loved the last but 2 verse. Brilliant work! |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-28 ch 1, | abuse... Well.. I can't think of anything sensible to say, so I'll just say you did one heck of an amazing job on this. Incredible work, keep writing. |
| soulspring 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abusethis is incredible... it's one of your greatest pieces yet. definitely going in my favorites. |
| Needa S 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...All I can say is Wow..Sarah it is your very best..You need to get your stuff published.. Brillant...3-Thumbs-up |
| cosmo-queen 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem, excellent message. I really liked the way you structured the poem, as it was very effective in conveying the gradual corruption of innocence. Keep up the great work :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYou are so talented! Every work of yours had deeply inspired me and many others out there, don't stop writing! |
| Lidless Eye 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is just awesome. Excellent job, the style really made the poem feel moodier. Gives it a better atmosphere. Great, great job! |
| The Black Rider 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably your best work ever. Very mythodical and cathartic and also very sad and moving. The structure struck me as clever as well. |
| Strayc@t 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abusevery good poem, very meaningfull! btw: what kind of HP shipper are you? Stray |
| Pear 2003-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt reminds me of Blake's peom, The Lamb. Very good comparison. The peom is very smooth, a pleasure to read. ^^ Sorry if my review seems weird, my mind is a bit off today. |
| Mime 2003-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...amazing. I like how you use the lamb as a comparison to a human child. Makes me think of the days when I was innocent *sly grin* Sorry I'm not logged in, I don't have time, but excellent work anyways! |