Reviews for You
cosmo-queen 8/7/03 . chapter 1
This is so sweet. Love can be such an inspirational and glorious feeling, and you convey this well in your poem. I liked the third and fourth lines especially. Keep up the good work :)

*cosmo-queen*
Riv 8/3/03 . chapter 1
What are you doing Alice!

You're becoming...happy!

It must be the holidays, that's it!

It's great all the same.
Crucified Sanctity 8/3/03 . chapter 1
Thats a brilliant poem! Really good for first try at a love poem -

- Crucified Sanctity -
UnknownWanderer 8/2/03 . chapter 1
Yes, the rhyming and flow was spectacular, not forced at all. Great job!

R&R me if you wish!
mdg 8/2/03 . chapter 1
it was really good and flowed nice