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| Summerdazed 2004-04-21 ch 1, | yes it is kinda sad...but there's a beauty in it too. =summerdazed= |
| Nerf 2003-09-26 ch 1, | best part; The bird flies up, the bird goes down it's vry sad, and i love the repitition. Well done! Thanx a lot for the review! XXNerfxx |
| emma 2003-08-27 ch 1, | Thats really good..u really got a talent for poetry |
| Linwe 2003-08-02 ch 1, | This is a really pretty poem. *sighs* I can never write unrhyiming poems! I wish I could! Signed, DDG |
| moondust 2003-08-02 ch 1, | aw This is really beautiful. Kinda sad though, but I like sad poems, they're very meaningful. You should write more poetry, you seem to have a talent for it! ^_^ ~moondust |
| Wrider 2003-08-02 ch 1, | Very sweet! It's almost like the chorus of a song or something, i like you you repeated the word sometimes. Sometimes storms, sometimes rain, sometimes fights... and then the 'most often not' to end it. Keep up the good work, this is a very nice poem! |