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Reviews For: Most Often Not

Summerdazed
2004-04-21
ch 1,
yes it is kinda sad...but there's a beauty in it too.
=summerdazed=
Nerf
2003-09-26
ch 1,
best part;
The bird flies up, the bird goes down
it's vry sad, and i love the repitition.

Well done!
Thanx a lot for the review!

XXNerfxx
emma
2003-08-27
ch 1,
Thats really good..u really got a talent for poetry
Linwe
2003-08-02
ch 1,
This is a really pretty poem. *sighs* I can never write unrhyiming poems! I wish I could!

Signed,
DDG
moondust
2003-08-02
ch 1,
aw
This is really beautiful. Kinda sad though, but I like sad poems, they're very meaningful. You should write more poetry, you seem to have a talent for it! ^_^

~moondust
Wrider
2003-08-02
ch 1,
Very sweet! It's almost like the chorus of a song or something, i like you you repeated the word sometimes. Sometimes storms, sometimes rain, sometimes fights... and then the 'most often not' to end it. Keep up the good work, this is a very nice poem!
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