A little too romantic for my tastes. :0 But still wow. Mostly I just love the vampiric/angelic references and the fact that they DON'T!! SUCK!! Not sucking is very, very good. Only crit? The last line's a bit anticlimatic. PLUS you used "undead" in the title. NOT COOL.

ahaha. But otherwise~~ good work! :D

I loved it. I am really into vampires and other things of that manner and i really enjoyed thispoem. That may sound morbid but it is true.
Jessica
-power to the pyros-

Wait, so you wrote this lovely thing because you were bored? With all respect to your grades, get bored in class more often!
I like the last line...I know the the poem is called "A lovesong for the Undead" but it doesn't seem like it at first. Then you hint at it through the poem. Wonderful poem! Keep writing!
>winged one