This is awsome i have never seen everything like this before this is a really good peice of work and could be published i never thought a high school girl could try to publish anything but you have shown this and you should try to publish it.

I'm definatly going through something like this... i think you know who it's with... I love you so much *runs fingers through ashley's hair*

Wow, only been here one day and you have seven fics up! Excellent!
I loved your story. As for men, well I have decided to quote a movie to make you feel better:

"Well, I'll tell you one thing: Men are bastards. And after about ten minutes of this I wanted to cut my own ** off with a kitchen knife."
~Hugh Grant's character from About A Boy.

hey there! i read ur poem just then, and i liked it alot. itz really touchin and gr8! hope u can keep it up and rite more!
bye and gud luck!