Ohh, I like this a lot. Especially the repeated lines are really well placed. Even the whole way the poem is written is just fast and dizzying. Very nicely done.

My head is a hurricane.
My mind is a tornado.

spinny, spinny, spinny...

~jimnist07

i am so confused...maybe i'm just dizzy

round and round...somebody please stop the room from turning...whee fun

oh, i love it too! 'spinning and spinning, dizzy, are you?' that line will be in my head for ages. one of my new Favourite Stories.

Fun.

Spinning is a really rare topic...haven't seen anyone write about it before...
~*Sable

coolness!

Brilliant! Very punny and cunningly crafted... and that's all there is to it. I enjoyed it muchly so.

Well, that thoroughly confusing. In a good way, of course. I like it- I know the feeling, at least when I could figure out what you were talking about- it's dizzying. hehe

Whoa... Not only was that poem very interesting and the only one like it that I have read, but it made me dizzy just reading it.

DUDE!! Really interesting and remarkably done, it does make me dizzy by the way.

To be totally honest... I love it as well! You're one of the few people I've read that have been able to pull of the there-are-only-two-words-in-this-verse-scenario. And although I love it when there are stanza's, the fact that this is one big chunk of text adds to the dizzifying effect of the poem. Have I mentioned how I LOVED this?