Definitions of potential, challenge, and
perserverance...three talents needed desperately for
diligent writing and poetry making...eh?

But it's interesting how the repetition of 'they call
it' keeps things in some sort of unemotional
definition of a common stigma on such qualities.

I most like third stanza with all the fabulous lines
like: 'Clubhouse choirs tape their mouths closed' and
'Plug into plug into plug into plug to fit in all the
Christmas tree lights'

And you end it all with the subject of
'perserverance'...not bad. ^_^

Peace

OH, loved this poem. I liked how you utalized(sp?) the epeating lines effectivly. It seems that a lot of poets cannot do that but you did it extremely well.

"The things inside that boil and erupt
Potential, they call it"

God, I loved this line. It's a very good description of potential.
Once again, good job.
Cheers.

I hope there's no hidden meaning to this, like nearly all poetry on the face of the planet. If so, then I'm too tired to figure it out. Or too stupid. Maybe both. YOU BE THE JUDGE!
Awesome poem. Very true. I really like the first...uh...I dunno, paragraph? The part about potential. I like it.
I like all of it.
You rock, Randi.

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