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Reviews For: Faithfully Waiting

My Little Poet
2003-09-21
ch 1,
awesome poem, i love the ideas and the wording and everything but sometimes the rhythm sways so if you wanted to look at it and try and get it to fit to one rhythm, it might make it a little easier to read. did that make sense?! :-) anyway, great job!
Shadafakup
2003-08-05
ch 1,
Hmm.. Simply touching.. I loved this.. Coz why.. It speaks of such devotion and faithfulness..
I liked the way you 'remembered' the past.. Emotive and emotional, this piece manages to evoke mixed feelings in me.. A little sadness and longing but still the hope waiting there..
Its well written, with a good rhythm and good flow..
I liked it.. =)

~Shadafakup
simpleplan13
2003-08-03
ch 1,
Thats a really sad poem & anyone can relate to it cuz it cna apply to family, friends, lovers anyone... its a great poem!
Starlight Maiden
2003-08-02
ch 1,
So sweet...beautifully written, well done...
Shy Cutie89
2003-08-02
ch 1,
oh, that was so sweet!Thatnx for reviewing mine. I htink tht is so awsomethat you have only been on for a couple of days and have 53 poems. Great Job!!
Lady of Romantic Dreams
2003-08-02
ch 1,
Oh man.. this is such a sad poem! Bittersweet. Death sucks, don't it? -Lady of Romantic Dreams
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