OOh very good. last line is intresting!! I like this.

~Kiara
PS-please review something of mine?? maybe "Talent" or "lil sheltered child" or something...anything..thanks!!

Cute story and humorous ending.

Oh...that is very meaningful. I like how you have twisted things around so things are not your stereotype characters.

Oh god. That last line is absolutely classic. I love it. I wish you'd continue writing.. it's quite great. I'll be checking back.. *wags finger*

Hehe!! This rocks in a kind of sad way!
I liked it a lot!
Diana x