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| Shadow 3013 2003-09-18 ch 1,   | Very nice job, especially the last line. |
| handle187 2003-09-16 ch 1, | Thunderstorm, ** with big fists A fan of Sir Mix A Lot and sand She puts it on the glass |
| Prisoner of Shadows 2003-08-23 ch 1, | That's awesome! I wish I could write like that... |
| Crusty-Diamonds 2003-08-23 ch 1, | wow beautiful imagery I love this. Even tho it describes a thunderstorm somehow it describes how I feel sometimes. I don't know if that sounds silly but yea ^_^ -Katie |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-08-15 ch 1, | I love the imagery! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Incubabe 2003-08-13 ch 1, | You are so good at this stuff. A triumph of poetry - kick-** stuff! |
| tofujunky 2003-08-05 ch 1, | You definitely have natural talent for haikus. This one is great. |
| RaspberryGirl 2003-08-05 ch 1, | Good personification. It's very fierce. |
| Thirteenth Raven 2003-08-03 ch 1, | I love it! Especially how you gave the thunderstorm a personality: splendid. |
| Kazuline 2003-08-03 ch 1, | cool imagery |
| Punky Monkey 2003-08-03 ch 1, | Another good haiku! nice work! :) |
| simpleplan13 2003-08-03 ch 1, | That's an interesting way to look at it.. i always think god is crying... |