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| Darket 2006-10-01 ch 13, anon. | abuseNice chap. I have nothing else to say really. I kinda went hiatus on it for a bit, lol |
| Darket 2006-09-17 ch 12,  | abuseNice! Just fuck those tears away, bravo! Good work. I'm catching up on this, but now I've gotta get typin' away, so I'll check this out. I owe you reviews anyway, lol. Peace Darket |
| Darket 2006-08-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm getting there, just gimme a bit. Good story by the way. I like crime fics. |
| Darket 2006-06-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseCouldn't really sign in--I felt lazy... Um, nice job. i've been away from my PC for a while and I keep forgetting to review this. Peace man. Good job with the chapter |
| Darket 2006-06-16 ch 7, | abuseSOrry, I'm just feeling a little tired. I was originally going to go find lyrics for Imagine but I got sidetracked and started reading. Well, I can't say this was a waste of time. I like this story. it seemed like it was lacking near the begining, but now it's really picked up and I really like where it's going. So you can garunteed that I will be back for this one later. Until we meet again... Peace Darket |
| Darket 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWell, i've seen your name around a few times, and with all the fame you have already I just thought I might want to check some of your work out. You were on Chibichocobo's spotlight list, I was put on it recently, so you definitely have some potential. So, expect a collage of reviews, tee hee! |
| Chibi-Akemi 2005-06-01 ch 2, | abuseOkay so I know three Yumi's...My own, Terryll-sama's and now there's a KT one. Man my head hurts but I really love how your space out those paragraphs. It gives it a weird feeling I can't seem to describe. |
| Chibi-Akemi 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseKT-san, everyone seems to hold you in high regard. I agree now just with this prologue! I'm going to try my best and read at least one chapter per day! |
| fragmented blue 2005-05-28 ch 22, | abuseWow. What more can I say? You have a way of summing everything up with such poetic and lyrical prose that I am awed. Your portrayal of Yumi was wonderful, but I think my favorite character might have been Izumi, in the end. Wonderful, yanagi-chan |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 22, | abuseAnd it is over. I suppose this and the previous chapter should have been a single chapter. The epilogue, I think, deserved a separate chapter of its own. But it is done. By God, it is done. A good story ends fulfilling what it has promised- and promising more as it ends. Thank you, too, Kakyou-dono. Thank you very much as well. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 20, | abuseAnd that ends it. Almost. A senseless way of thinking and living. What are humans without their conscious decisions? What are we without our chosen actions and the outcomes that result from the driven work of our hands? Reduced to our basest, most primitive instincts, we can only be animals. A well done side arc, Kakyou-dono. I am anticipating the coming end of it all. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 19, | abuseA surprising turn. You've depicted the thoughts and purpose of one of the antagonists, Shaami, for this one. Although I find her a confusing and somewhat arrogant character, I cannot bring it in myself to hate her. But destiny is never really set. It is made without thinking. Poor Ai. Poor, poor Ai... |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 18, | abuseHajime's part is nice. He might be a guy, but I somehow find it easy to relate to him. And his fondness for Ai is touching. I like him. More of him, please! |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 17, | abuseThe sparseness and grace of the previous chapter. Interesting contrast of character's all-too-human emotions and approach to life vis-a-vis her cold-blooded profession. Kurenai Ran. And it begins. |
| Yatori Shizuku 2005-05-19 ch 16, | abuseSparse. Graceful. Beautiful. Done. And next... |