Reviews for Somewhere I Belong

Reviews For: Somewhere I Belong

Nachtsider 2005-09-01 ch 1,	Having closely followed your other works, I was more than a little surprised by the turn you took with 'Somewhere I Belong'. I was also greatly delighted, the Egyptian mythology angle being highly fascinating (I have long been an afficionado of ancient matters). Well done!
Sarah 2003-11-11 ch 1,	hey... this poem is beautiful... and the title... lol! my fav band in the whole wide world! your work is awesome!
Aimee Raven 2003-11-09 ch 1,	Wow...that was awesome, I've had a passion for egyptian mythology since i was a kid, read the black book, this is really very good, the emotions, the anxiety...and I love the end bit. 'Somewhere I belong', lol, I worship linkin Park :D. gtg, love and good luck. Mia
phoenixa-mechanique 2003-10-10 ch 1,	This is a very original poem. What I find wonderful about it is that it is not related to that overused, overestimated, currently-hyped theme of undying love ( Thank God ) This poem certainly is creative though it can be improved. I think you should have shortened it slighltly because it was a bit draggy, threw me off momentum. Some of the rhyming/structure scheme wasn't too effective but came off alright. Other than that, this is very fine poem.Fine!
IHJ 2003-08-25 ch 1,	Okay. I have an aversion to long long poems. I do. Milton's poem destroyed it for me. But I decided to give this a go. And glad I did. K, there's not really a regular rhythm going here. I don't know if you care about that or not (I don't in my poems) so... shrug I think in some stanzas you use "heart" too often. Of course, it's practically impossible to find a non-scientific synonym for the word "heart"! Vivid imagery. I do not know anything about Egyptian Gods, but you seem to describe them and their 'duties' very well. Like the lines: Standing on these polished stones, That has no permanent surface, That sinks and freezes beneath my feet. Very good poem. -Izzy J.
Necromantique 2003-08-15 ch 1,	Brilliant verbal illustration, sinner. Great reflection on Egyption mythology
Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-12 ch 1,	Holy sh*t. Incredible, it blew me away. Amazing poem, great imagery. Keep writing!
Keep it 100 2003-08-04 ch 1,	Very great work. ~Heart of the Sword
Winged One1 2003-08-03 ch 1,	This is great! I love ancient Egypt stuff...wonderful poem! >winged one
catanna 2003-08-03 ch 1,	Chris, i think you repeated some of the words too many times. The poem is great but i think you repeated 'Here' too much.That's all. It really is very good.

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