I dunno what torture you've been put through. but whatever the pain did to you, has made you a remarkable poet, with strength in words, where there might not be strength in heart. sometimes...the bad pays off in the endMel

The fact that you write your songs with so much emotion is what makes them good. Great job on this, I love it.

oh, i really like this. i love the first and second verses, and the line 'i'm i so much pain, i'm fine' is greta too. very well done, i like it a lot.

I quite like this. I like the last two lines of the chorus'

"I want to be normal

But I can't be you"

I liked that. It's kind of sarcastic and I'm all for the sarcasm. Unless it's not sarcastic at all and I've just insulted you or something. The I apologize.

In conclusion, good work.

Have a nice day.

This is really amazing stuff, well done, the structuring is great, the rhyming scheme really has a nice flow to it, I could really imagin it being sung, its a very emotional song, and has a nice theme to it, well done for a great song, keep it up

I rate this song: 8.7/10

YOU SUCK! that was horrible! There if your used to taking abuse, I'll give it. But honestly what I just read was really good. You have a great way of capturing emotion. And far more talent than myself. Also your lyrics sound quite intelligent, which is something deppressingly hard to find these days. And don't worry about your lack of life. If you had a life then you'd be normal, and how many of us on this site are, or even want to be normal? Anyway I think thats long enough now. Good work.