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| Monkeyruler 2003-08-04 ch 1, | WOW talk about detail! i thought ur other story was filled with great descriptions but this one WOW! I love the way u described the begining paragraph. And ur characters's attitudes fit great. Keep up the great work |
| superdawnky88 2003-08-04 ch 1, | Pretty good story i say. two thumbs up. kinda sick..but hey whatever :P |
| The Pretenders 2003-08-03 ch 1, | OMG! This is a great story! I love it! gotta look you uup! |
| Sage Valkisco 2003-08-02 ch 1, | Holy **...one mean ** right there ^.^ good story me like |