That was quite funny to read as well as being serious so I thought that element of it was good, you might want to reconsider the structure of it, because you could have talked about Mercutio when you spoke about Sampson and Gregory and the nurse and you could have also included the friendship love between Romeo and Mercutio as well. But overall I think this was a pleasure to read! :)

Hey, Diviya here, I CANT BELIEVE YOU PUT THIS UP! u must have been REALLY bored! i chucked mine away! anyway i think its a great essay, well i probabably would have thought it was a great essay if i had bothered to read it (that sounds really harsh but u understand right? a whole year on RJ would drive a gurl crazy, i dont want to read ne more of that even if it is a year later. Wow this is a really long bracket!) Neway going to read ur other stories and stuff now, u have 1 story in ur fav, so u do read fiction stories (story)! And u have sum1 in ur authors list, pooba's sotries are good, read Thorn of the kingdom or summat or other - cant remember the tittle. Gotta blaise now, u better have read this review as u should actually read all ur reviews but god knows y u want 2 have a second glance at this english essay (no offence!)
luv ya Ploy
Homer (Doughnuts...m)

i like your out look on all this. I never thought of the father like that, i always though him more in control than willing to forgive. But i have to disagree partly on the Mercutio matter. I do belive like you said that he is the 'player' of the group, but i don't think he really doesn't belive in love. All in all, nice essay.