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| WaitingForMyWestley 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseGood story! Very descriptive. The end was surprising, too! Waiting. |
| Linnet 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWhoa...I'll never be able to listen to that song again...I like how you didn't exactly explain why someone died when the baby shed a tear...adds more intrigue to the story. -Linnet |
| Atty 2003-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGaah! You're too damn talented for your own good. This story is amazing. You REALLY can write like no other. ~Atty |
| yukelele 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseah wow.. i wasnt sure if the baby had an insight and knew theyd die or if it was killing the people!.. really good though.. just a bit creepy.. heh |
| Cryptic Insanity 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abuseWoah, this story gives me a whole new meaning to that little baby song. Heh. Very good job, I loved it XD |
| BlueEyedPrincess01 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was so good. Really eerie but I loved it. |