Wow... this is really good so far. I must know what happens next. Scary too...

bizarre... kind of cconfusing but I'm tired so I'm not very intellectual right now. I'm a veggie... cucumber i think... In Christ -S

O! Suspenseful! I think you've got a really good thing going here.
-God bless-

Dad I think it nis really good but I also think that you should finish up my story and Elisha's story and Josiah's story before you write a nother story. But maybe when your done with those you can finish up that story. love Elissa