Very, very interesting! Great job! I need something else to say!
Alyssha

Good; I loved the last line.

He Who Walks On All Fours

Nice poem, I like the rhyming in it. Very interesting subject too. Keep it up.

CT

Wow that was great! You tell great story-ish poems. That's like, one of my favorites! The rhyming was great, and so was the imagery. It was a good poem about war...oh the symbolism. Great job!