Thats a good one to, really good.

i love this piece of writing! its truly amazing.

ah yes. we all get angsty sometimes... :) you should go read my poem on Writer Spirits, called "Inside Me". or go find a really really angsty one on TPS...but don't. We're all angsty! Yay! Sorry... :P we can beat everyone up!

you started to rhyme and then you didn't...what's up with that??
anyway,the story itself was quite good in my opinion...