My head is hurting, Space it out..
You are strange, very very strange.
What's with the camera movement! It's so confusing. GOSH

This chapter is just a block of words. Ever heard of paragraphs?

Oh MY GOD THAT WAS LONG. and i'm not even talking about the whole thing. I'm talking about the first chapter. No one is gonna have the attention span to read this. I didn't even wanna finish the first chapter. that story was way too long!

wow, u guys at fiction press are tight! u hardly ever review! at fanfiction (This sites sister) there are stories with 10s of reviews, litrully! this very long...and im reveiwing to sayt that you must be a writer addict.

Bluefoxinfinity,

Ps some poeple know me better as greenwolfzero, which is my ff.net name

wow. this would be about 4300 pages in a book. you write a lot.

It's not entirely true what you make Black Puma say in this chapter. There ARE African-American werewolvs

Hello, Justin Gaston, this is TorrLev. I'm looking to start a column featuring my favorite stories on FictionPress, I don't know if it'll be approved though: I'm just in the process of beginning to write it and assemble some ideas. I would, however, love to feature your story as a representative for the Humor section if/when I ever get my column started! I found it to be HILARIOUS! I love the beginning when she is drawing the caricature of her patient, that was so funny! Well, send me and e-mail at Jagcat8u2@aol.com letting me know whether I could feature your story (among others) in my column. Now, don't get your hopes up too much, if you want it in the column, because I'm not sure if it will even be approved, but I'm definitely going to try! Love the story, and I can't believe how long it is! Great job!
Sincerely,
TorrLev

You should send that in to a company!