Oh this is such a great poem! It was very dark and deep. I wish I could write something like this...too bad I can only write essays.
~Minchi

Very nice poem... I love the repetition of the hair, and the significance of it. Excellent imagery as well, really helps build the rather dark mood of the poem, especially "Words scratched across it like claw marks" and "Dishes, only half clean, rot in the sink/ Clothes, still wet, rest inside the tomb/ Which we used to call a washer."

woah, that was good and awesome and great. nice. very, very nice.

This is really really good. i have to read more of your stuff now. i like the way you used wording in this poem and the imagery. Its seriously so good. please r/r me sometime.
_angel

At first I thought this was about a couple that broke up, and I still kind of do. I don't really agree that it's about death, but then, I am interpreting it differently. ^_^ It's interesting.

Hm it seemed like a really good breakup poem until the last few stanzas. But you're right, writing and muses can do weird things to the intentions of a poem. Anyhow, it turned out great anyways, I loved the beginning.

hm, i've neglected your originals for too long carter-chan.

"But I won't go after you.
I'm afraid to go after you
Even though I need you back.
I refuse to go to Madison Street
And retrieve you
Why?"

this was the strongest stanza by far, simply because it gets to the point, asking heartfelt questions and making a poignant statement. This was a very strong poem, your best so far!

Wow, That poem started out in a really different manner, one wouldn't expect it to lead to such a, well, climax! It was exeptionally well written. And I really liked it. I'm, strangely, extremely fascinated by death...No, I'm not sadistic(sp?)! And well, in a review for this particular poem, it feels rather odd to wish you, but hey! HAPPY DIWALI!

Oh, I forgot how much I loved your writing. I mean, I knew I loved it, but I gorgot ^how much^. Anyway, this is, obviously, great. This is up there with my favorites of yours just because... just because. Too many reasons. You don't need rambles from me. But, really, it's awesome. I love the descriptions in the beginning and just how it moves and *rambles*

Awesome.

Kudos and daisies.

-Jess

Wow that is so great... i am kind of confused about it... thats the great part... i love the signifigance of the hair being places.. what a new way of looking at hair loss! haha Great job i love reading your stuff!
-Court

very sad, and nicely written. Part of it started to remind me of a song called Comfortable by John Mayer in a way.. but I find odd ways to find relations to things. Anyway... its a great poem. Keep it it. ~R

its good although the length of it kinda dragged on. it was still very well written. good job

Interesting. I rather like where the writing took you. Great wording.
~God bless~

Excellent poem, I loved the way this was written. The structure was very effective to the overall poem. This was very deep and meaningful, keep up the great work :)
*cosmo-queen*

Your poems keep me going, reading them makes me think and ponder. This is another excellent piece of yours and this is my current favourite.