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| Summerdazed 2004-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseyour a nature lover aren't u?great to find another like me hehe:O) I can't write about nature much cuz I can't quite capture its beauty as well as you do. =summerdazed= |
| cosmo-queen 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGood poem with a meaningful message. I particularly liked the second stanza. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| InMemoryofPhil 2003-10-04 ch 1, | abusewow, this was a wonderful poem. really deep. *sorry i haven't reviewed sooner. darn my memory, i kept forgetting to review others* |
| I am Gone 2003-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOh verty nice I liked it. |
| ColorCrayons 2003-08-19 ch 1, | abuseoh i love it! i am no city girl (ahem, hick) and so this kind of poetry speaks out to me. great job! ~color outside the lines~ |
| moondust 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Though the ending...doesn't seem like an ending...maybe you could add another line or something? *shrugs* Oh, and just a bit of advice when writing poetry - not everything needs to rhyme. I know you only did like every other line, and you were probably doing a specific type of poem that requires that...BUT I still think that poetry that you can define everything in words with emotion is just as strong if not more, than a couple of rhyming words. When I write poetry, I don' t really bother with rhyming, I just let the words flow, and then of course revise it ^_~ , and if some words happen to rhyme, then great! If not, it's not the end of the world. So yeah, just some friendly advice Though you hardly need it~ Oh, I updated this really cool pic of Ma'at (egyptian god) on my site if you wanna check it out. hehe ~moondust p.s: WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPATE?!?!?! |
| Linwe 2003-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was a good poem. It was pretty and I like the way it rhymed. Signed, DDG |
| JainaTina 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW...i like it. *smiles* i like how the words weave around and don't really "rhyme". Great job! |