It's pretty. I like it. Your word choice is excellent and the whole poem flows well despite the seemingly (I didn't actually count it out) meter of the poem. Eye-catching, eloquent and very well done. :) Thanks for posting this.

Cheers,~*~LIZ

LOVE IT!

This was inspiring, and frighteningly deep, it's scary somtimes where some of our words come from, isn't it? I think so. Anyways, I liked this there was some rhyme but more than that I felt as thought it truly came from the heart and spilled onto the pages.

amazingyou rock!

This is just beautiful, I'm speechless, I got nothing more to say!

I am/was left jaw-dropped. Amazing, just absolutely amazing, I have never in my life read something so meaningful that is so heart-felt that it describles a newly-wed couple, an elderly couple, and the typical true High School Sweet hearts all in one. The passion is so mature yet so childlike in the fact that children never lie, but see the world and people though caring eyes. Amazing again. Why this was left unpublished is unknown to me, but I would have waited forever to read this.

As Always,Eve

I love it. I've rarely(or never) read such a descriptive poem.

It seemed weird at first... but then I start to see it in a different way and completely fell for it. There's so much in it that it must have been a really confusing period for you...

It first looks a little insensitive, without too much meaning, but then you start feeling the words. Perfect! I wish I could put things into words like you can.

Sara

One of the best poems. Meaningful in almost any heart, love springs from here.

This is very sweet and I'm willing to forgive its slight cliched-ness because we can't always be completely original all the time. Plus, there is also some really good stuff in here that isn't cliched, so.Ok, you're probly sick of hearing this from me, but I'm going to reinforce it anyway. Please, please, PLEASE don't separate lines just for the sake of separating them! It bugs me, and other people too. Don't get me wrong, I love your writing, I just find that one thing annoying. lovies, pointythings

it's beautiful, i love the descriptions of of the pure, deep love.

Love it. It's so beautiful. It expresses all of my feeling for my secret love. Thanks for writing. It flows so beautifully. If you were to keep this safe, and find that special someone, and read that to them, there would be no way for them to ever want to leave you.

wow thats amazing :) i loced it

Why was this on your chest for so long? This should have been published decades ago!
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The formatting is kinda... ackward, but the grammar and overall feel is wonderful. I feel so warm now, and can relate.
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God must be happy he put such a talent in you.
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9/10 (and I forgot to grade your other poem, but it's the same)

That is truly magicly, a much ?friendlier? peom that the others. It's more love and friendship based rather than tragic and dark. I really like it. WD