Villanelles aren't easy, and I've been reading a bunch on this site to prove it. This is really good, and it's clear to see you have a passion. Great job.

wow, those words had a lot of strength behind them, i'm very impressed. awesome job!

I know you cannot hear me, but I'm crying right now. I love this poem, and the message. The repetition of "the people cannot hear them cry" worked very well here.