That's...almost heartbreaking. The way he asks. In such a plaintive tone.

I don't understand...which means, because i'm a faithful reviewer and reader that you simply have to add more to this to explain what is going on and then MAKE HIM HAPPY.

aww now i want to buy them a drink. too bad i can't. i love the way you wrote this, and i think it'd be a great start to a story. it would be great for you angel idea, or maybe even your brother idea from the step brother's pov. well anyways, i really liked it! ja!

This was so awesome. I loved it. VERY good piece of angst. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work!

Very interesting. I would like to see more of this one.. when you get around to it.