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| BJ Worth 2005-11-05 ch 1,   | Sad. Makes you think about how our actions affect other's lives. Nice job making me stop and think. |
| fgdsfjgljlsfd 2005-04-16 ch 1, | Wow... beautiful job. I love your use of words. God, I wish I could write that good. Keep it up! |
| Callista Melaney 2005-03-29 ch 1, | Beautiful. |
| AsMoon 2005-01-09 ch 1, | Wow, this is amazing. I love the way it's written. I especially love the part about "a jagged heart...I broke a rose printed lamp." The way it ends is perfect, too. Keep up the good work! |
| Coeur Mysterieux 2004-12-21 ch 1, | that is awesome! i really like it! keep writing! luv ya, doll!~tiny k |
| that uptown girl 2004-09-25 ch 1, | Wow...This is really good; I love it. It reminds me of that saying "Life was so much easier when boys had cooties and clothes didn't have to match." Don't know why, but it does. Sad, but powerful. I love it. ~Klaurelp |
| penchant 2004-09-23 ch 1, | A really good poem. It's descriptive enough for the reader to see images. I want to know more of what happened! |
| GreekFaerie 2004-09-19 ch 1, | This poem is really feeling. I especailly liked the last stanza. I can relate to the idea of going back to elemantry school, where things were less complicated. Wouldn't it be nice sometimes? The only stanza I didn't understand was the second one. Why can't she wear the shoes anymore? a really touching subject. i can't wait to read more fo your stuff~ GreekFaerie |
| Moon-Chaser 2004-09-09 ch 1, | Wow really good stuff, I can relate to what you said, its very powerful. |
| sialgunavez 2004-09-09 ch 1, | I love it. Great poem with a lot of emotion. |
| jus-me 2004-04-17 ch 1, | I have been in the shoes of the friend who left and in the those of the friend who has been left. so I can easily relate. beautiful poem. |
| Written 2004-03-14 ch 1, | Oh, excellent job! ^.^ I really enjoyed reading this. A bit sad, but very well done. |
| initiative 2003-09-29 ch 1, | wow. this was excellent. a bit hard to follow, at times- but overall, it was great. there was real meaning, and made me think. i don't know how to write an effective review, but you can't blame me for trying. i'm all wordless. please, keep up the great work. peaces. |
| Punky Monkey 2003-08-04 ch 1, | Nice poem. enjoyed reading it :) |
| Celestial Mist 2003-08-04 ch 1, | Oh, very nice. I especially love the second verse - very nice, descriptive, and pretty. There's not really much critique one can offer for a poem like this - you did very well in expressing your feelings in a way that's easy to relate to, and your ideas and vocabulary were unique without being outlandish. Very very nice. ^_^ |