|Reviews for Turn To Me|
| lostrunner 8/4/03 . chapter 1
omg! that made me cry so friggin bad! my boyfriend just broke up with me, and he would write me poems how i can turn to him whenever im depressed, and then he friggin broke up with me just BECAUSE im depressed.
wonderful poem though
| Cry Tears of Darkness 8/4/03 . chapter 1
very sweet poem, very nice.
| mapofyourhead 8/4/03 . chapter 1
Oh...like this poem. Very muchly so.
The break in the rhythm, which would usually indicate lack of work for the rhyme scheme and everything, is well used to get across your point with the last stanza/verse.