Wow... wonderful haiku! Great wording.

That was awesome!

It was an okay poem, but definately short, sweet, and to the point. Lightning isn't AMBER it's WHITE!

Great job on this! We've been having lots of storms around here so lightning is all around me lately!

I thought lightning was white... not amber... but hey that's me. ^^ Very nice.

that was a beautiful description of lightning. Great job!

the poem wedding.

i wish it was true though,
and once again.
nice poem!

~JunJin-Lover~

Awesome job on this.


~Heart of the Sword

It was wonderful, but I don't think it spoke to me. It didn't seem like lightning to me. It seemed more like... fire?? I don't know. I liked it, though.

very nice ...i love lightning...

this is great!
i love it
sorry I didn't check for your updates,
well i'm back!
nice job!