wow, this is great. I like it. It's so sweet.

excellent story although it reminded me much of a poem it was very moving. Come check out some of my stuff.

Sivart

::Wistful sigh:: This one really tears at me, because I feel that way so often. Very well written, and full of emotion. Although I think this would be better placed in the Fantasy Poetry category, instead of Fiction. Good job!

you'd think that this would be a love poem...not a fantasy story. Oh well...you decide...good all the same