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Fast Food Fantasy 2004-02-21 . chapter 1
:-( i love you honey... *pushes fear away from herself* i love you too much to be afraid of anything you have to say or anything you're going through. I know the feelings expressed in this poem... as well as the joy of finding the one friend who truly understands and listens... I hope, if I cannot be that friend for you, you will find that person shortly. Because you deserve no less, and should accept no worse.
black pixie 2003-08-04 . chapter 1
wow this is very deep and i like it a lot
Mikala2 2003-08-04 . chapter 1
I really really love the concept and theme of this poem. & I think that you really expressed the concept and emotions well through your wording. Seriously, I thought it was very good and I felt that I could really relate to it. I loved the whole idea about people not really knowing who you truly are and the secrets that you hold within yourself. I thought that was such a great concept. My favorite lines were:
"they never see the empty darkness in my head
or hear the deafening screams"
I really liked those two lines in particular. I loved the whole poem. you did a good job!
~mikala
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