I love this one too! so far, this is my favorite! you're such an amazing writer!

wow he sounds depressed... great

suicide is always a sucky topic to write about.. but you did a very good job on portaying it. i liked the style and what not. well done. *TI*

I agree...that cutting does dull the pain on the inside...the inside pain is more powerful than the physical pain...i liked it alot...

im not a very poetry type of person but your's was pretty lovely.

Very very nice. I really felt like I could relate to the words. Your rhyming scheme was excellent. Keep up the good work! ^.^

ciao

Wow! Very very dark! I loved it. I love dark and angsty poetry. I thought that the way you descibed certain aspects of the topic were very well thought out and desciptive. For Instance I liked this line:
"The cuts they dull the pain inside"
I thought that line was really good. It jumped out at me as I read it. I liked the whole idea that you talk about the blade being like the boy's "salvation" i guess. I thought that was good. I thought it was a well written poem. It had a really nice rhyming scheme that added to the mood of the poem. Great Job!
~mikala