   Fast Food Fantasy 2003-08-25 . chapter 1wow... i really really like this poem... especially the two ending lines. |
 swift sky silver 2003-08-05 . chapter 1wow. this was great. very well written=0) |
 Andrea 2003-08-05 . chapter 1 It was pretty good |
 thaiswirl 2003-08-05 . chapter 1another great poem...i really enjoyed reading it |
 Arien 2003-08-04 . chapter 1lovely babe |
| jessica 2003-08-04 . chapter 1 ASHLEY YOUR BRILLANT!! your such a good writer wowza these are awsome! ok luv ya! AWSOME ** DUDe! |
 Roberta Pryce Robinson 2003-08-04 . chapter 1Very good! It was so to the point, so insightful! Very good poem! |
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