this is a great poem... i just want you to know that you're not alone! you've got friends who care about you! i should know, i'm one of them!

I feel like that every morning...reality sux

beautiful poem...i really love the ending to it...great work!

That was awesome! No for real it was! I always wake up at the best part of a dream...and then I try real hard to get back to sleep...like last night, I had a dream I was Kate Winslet's character from Titantic and the cute Jack guy saved me and I saved him in the end...you know I actually might write it down into a new story while it is still fresh in my mind...cuz it was kinda weird and crazy but just before Jack kissed me in the end...I woke up! Then I tried to fall asleep again but my sister made me drive her guy friend home from sleeping over. (my Dad is outta town and my Mom could care less what we do...) But, anyway I never got to finish it...well, maybe I won't make it into a story cuz it is kinda lame without the kiss...eh, who is gunna know about it right? I could just throw in the kiss. Sh...I might just do that.

wow this is impressive

I love the image that this poem is based upon.

Nice, very angsty.

Cute! I Like this one! I happen to love the ran, but this poem still ran true! Nicely done! Good poem!

great poem!! i really kno how that feels! anyways, great job, keep writing!!