this poem is wonderful. it's poignant, and powerful in its simplicity. very good.

Another absolutely extraordinary piece! You are such an amazing writer! 'Tis a pleasure to read works such as these.

~*~AbunaiChikara

I love the metaphor of the zebra because its true for humans too.. i like this poem a lot!

i really liked the first 2 stanzas, the 3rd one didn't grab me so much but the opening 2 lines really caught me.

Great job, I really liked this

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How do you come up with these? Honestly, the feelings behind all of your poems are so astoundingly powerful. The metaphor here was incredible... I don't know how you do it, but you'll have to teach me some time. :) Awesome, awesome work, Kim.