 Shan'xara 2004-06-20 . chapter 16 Oops... Our dear Mario is a bit naive, isn't he? But I suppose, he will wake soon enough - and I doubt, that there will be a keeper to safe him... I don't think, he is important enough for his attention *eg*... |
 Shan'xara 2004-06-20 . chapter 15 Nice summary of official dinners *lol*. But a little short, in my opinion ;)... |
 Viresse430 2004-06-13 . chapter 16I read this while awaiting your other story's update. It sounds pretty good, and has that mystery that you always seem to have in your work. |
 Shan'xara 2004-03-21 . chapter 14 OOps, sorry I'm late. Very mysterious - but I am starting to develop an idea, who this Keeper might be... Poor Mario ;). |
 Darth Gilthoron 2004-03-15 . chapter 12You think you know what's gonna happen? You really do? Oh, I'm afraid knowing the opera won't help you there... ;-p |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-10 . chapter 13 o.o So now Floria knows everything... And this evening she is going to see Scarpia - I wonder, if she can resist his personality... or her jealousy ;). She is in an ideal position to betray everyone - as Luca obviously guessed. |
 shan'xara 2004-02-06 . chapter 12 A Discworld Film? Really nice reference ;). Makes me feel at home... Let's hope they see something about the Night Watch - to show them what the Duty of a Guardsman is all about... ;) Just my wishful thinking, I know - the end is inevitable... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-06 . chapter 11 What a nice greeting... Mario the diplomat... -.- Let's hope, Tosca isn't too jealous... And Scarpia didn't leave too great an impression on her... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-06 . chapter 10 o.o A rather confusing conversation, sometimes I couldn't really follow it, but it's clear, that things don't look good for the "good guys"... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-06 . chapter 9 Seems as if Floria is in trouble. Trouble with capital "T". She swallowed Scarpias bait hook, line and sinker - let's just hope, that Mario won't get in trouble because of it... OOps - who am I kidding... I know how the story goes *lol*... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-06 . chapter 8 Ominous scene and the best chapter yet. Vividly described feelings, a desperate background, great political explanations for the situation - all in all very good. |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-05 . chapter 7 Strange... Definitely strange - the Keeper is behind enemy lines, and the prisoner goes free? Rather confusing - I'm wondering how this will play out. |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-03 . chapter 6 Interesting scene - a lot more descriptions this time... And a rather mysterious Commander I'd wager. Pretty obvious he has something to do with the riddle... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-03 . chapter 5 I can only say one thing to this: Know your enemy... *g* Obviously Grenada is trying to... |
 Shan'xara 2004-02-03 . chapter 4 This felt rather unfamiliar - and by now a lack of descriptions is being noticeable. And I hope, that you will not continue the habit of having events retold instead of describing them directly... |