This story is AMAZING! KEEP IT UP XD, and your characters are obsessed with ur "time of month" so I suggest you use tape on their mouths before they reveal something else XD or lock them in a cage or something =P

I must say, you have piqued my interest just a bit with this story.

Before I go on, however, I wanted to suggest that maybe you find a better way to work flashbacks into your story.

A simple sentence, such as, --Chase's eyes glazed over momentarily as THAT moment replayed in his mind, drawing him back into that oncomfortable place... He saw it as if it were happening all over again...

Or something like that. The flow of your story is interrupted by by the glaring reference to the fact that we're leaving the actual story for something else.

*goes on to keep reading*

hm...the summary actually sounded good, but when you read the story, everything seemed to move by too quickly. If you'd added more detail and legthened the chapters with more then just he did..., he said..., type of stuff, it would be decent. Plus, Jack admitted to liking chase way too soon. It just seems like you jot down whatever comes to mind and skip the confrontation and stuff. I'm not a great writer, and these are only my opinions, so dont take anything offensively please.

I'm reviewing...look at this!! Where is chapters 24 and 25? hmm? PLease update, at least just for me!!

favorite disney movie... easy...sleeping beauty

*cries* OMG, that's so sad! ;.; I'm close to crying, but my parents are in the room and me and my wife-to-be (TJ) are talking. About the day I freak out and scare the ** out of a person by yelling about my marriage to a girl in Kentucky! XD Neeways... Addie is adorable! I keep imagining him all these dresses and I'm like "*wants*" and all the other guys are like that too! Cept we all want Addie! Are all the guys there gay? It'd be my dream job to watch the security cams if they all were! *drools* Hmm... a place full of hot gay guys with disorders... yeah... definately my new dream job... I want to find the mental hospital from when homosexuality was thought of as a mental disorder... hopefully they were all locked up in the same place! ^^ *lives in own little world for a few hours*

ok youre not that mean...

o youre mean...do they all have a crush on orlando bloom?...do i win?

Yay!! Jack loves Chase!! I'm in PA and havent talked 2 u in a long time!! randomchaos2714 im me!!

Awsome story! Hope to see more soon ^-^Table-chan

Interesting story...It talks about boys with so many problems in their lives... T_TIt's great to see that their nurse is really nice with them... sometimes doctors aren't like her.Ah I hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

hey sexy... c'est moi, tyler
finish god damn u!
*blows kissies*

aww... how sweet! ::melts::

Hmm... It took me a while to read your story because I kept getting interrupted -_-. But I'm here now, yes I am. Well first, I'll say that I love your story. Heh, I wouldn't review if I didn't.
I think there are a lot of characters in here though, and the constant switching of POVs gets me a bit confused, especially since some of their names are so similar. I think maybe you can have just two or three narrating most of it. Or have you tried writing from third person? I know some people find that they write easier from first person POV, but I think it would be a bit less confusing.
And despite that I still love your story ^_^ It's like the characters each have their own mini plots going on. Anyway, I hope you update soon!! ^_~
-> Rel

ok, a little too short, PLEASE update soon! i hate cliffys... there wasnt enough here to say good or bad