this was amazing. If you wrote this in grade seven wow, this is wonderful. i love the decriptions that make it easy to visualize and the flow of the words.

Woah, I

not bad, though little unrealistic. still, i like the style, and it is an interestign plot. good work.

Oh, when i read this i cried. its so sad. im upset, i think i need to go read something happy. beautifully written though. i loved it.

That's s-s-so good!