WOW Another long poem, very deep. This one didn't rhyme like most of your other poems do, but it worked wonderfully!! I loved the line "that what I am searching for is out there, and is in turn searching for me." ah, the hope of everyone in the world. Oh, and the bit about the young suffering because of the old, so true, although of course there are some amazingly nice older people out there, haha. Anyways, hats off to you yet again on a fantastic poem!!

~ winter

Wow...I'm speechless. That was such a magnificent poem. But it didn't rhyme. And it was optimistic. This isn't usually your writing style, Eladriewen. It's pleasantly surprising! *Sigh* Another wonderfully written poem by a talented poet. Please post more poetry! I love reading your stuff. *Rereads review* I must hang my head in shame, for my review does not do your poem justice. But I am at a loss for words. *Applauds for Eladriewen again*