OMG THAT IS SOO BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! i love the watching the blushing sunset fade to a dusky rose! and the last two lines of the poem! its so beautiful! rock on!

I like that one too. It's sweet.
QR

wow, thats so bloody good
specially for a quick thing
i think my favorite bit is
"watching blushing sunset
fade to dusky rose"
all your stuff is really good btw
thanks for reviewing my stuff
lizrose-the-evil-elf

Goes to show that going about things in a rushed manner can be a good thing after all.

Wow.. it's just so damn good! Honestly. It's beautiful. I love it. I can't beleive you just wrote in three minutes... wow. Great job.

If you really did write this in only three minutes then I suggest that you continue to write poetry quickly without much reflection because this one is actually pretty good.

(-gasp- I do beleive that this is the first nice review of your stuff I have given you on this profile! ;P

I like it. Nice and sweet. Good Job.

Aw - very cute!