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| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-18 ch 11,  | abusei love this story! it's so cute and i want up dates! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-20 ch 11, | abuseThis was a sweet chapter. It's nice to see everyone allowing this relationship :P Poor Teague, though...I doubt he can get any more confused! Looking forward to seeing what happens next ^_^ |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 10, | abuseYeah, disctraction's kinda bad when people are in danger...but it was a mighty good distraction!! They're so cute together ^_^ Adrik's job sounds really fun! Lightning bolts, whee! Oh, man, would I abuse that power...heh heh... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 9, | abuseWow, they're just confusing each other! Time to sit down and talk about their feelings :P Wonder what happened to Tori? Hope she isn't in uber danger!! Is Becca at least safe...? Good for Teague, staying on track...kinda... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 8, | abuseGeez, talk about choosing the lesser of two evils! I'm surprised he didn't just clock Karolek or kick him in the shin. Probably would have worked...maybe... Oh well, I suppose they'll solve their differences... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 7, | abuseAw, this was a sweet chapter. It's fun seeing the relationship between Teague and Karolek develop, especially since there's so much friction between them ^_^ |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 6, | abuseAh! Plot! So, who were those people and who did Karolek kill? I'm curious! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 5, | abuseI like when the Archangels appear. They've always been so interesting! Wow, Teague just keeps getting more and more confused...hopefully he doesn't blow up... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 4, | abuseAnnoying Teague does seem like a fun hobby... Becca's so sweet! Loved that little "Hell vs. hell" part. Very funny. Ouch, no wonder Karolek was kicked out of Hell...I wonder what his brother did to make him kill him? |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 3, | abuseYeah, shampooing can be pretty nice. No wonder he turned to putty! Karolek really is a nice guy, isn't he? As far as I'm concerned, Teague ended up with a good group of people! :P |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 2, | abuseWow, Teague has a lot of mood-swings!! Loved that last part. Karolek is so mean ^_^ |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start... I like how this story is starting out ^_^ Very cute :P |
| Kokoro no Wasuremono 2006-06-13 ch 11, | abuseI love it..I mean the story. (^_^) Poor Angel, must be h-hell for him to have a demon to be a lover..(^_^) But this things would spark more interest anyways so I'm cool..(^_^) |
| D. Empress 2006-05-06 ch 11, | abuseAll of your stories rock. They're all so good that you're going to go onto my author alert list. If I had money to spare, I donate it to your muses (well, to the ones who don't already have a fortune) so they'll work harder to inspire you to write more. Write more! Please. |
| Tom 2005-10-20 ch 11, anon. | abuse*gasps* I love this story! Eek its so sweet and enthralling!! |