Wow, very biting, but very well written. Great job.

Very nice poem... It has a nice rhythm to it.

this was really cool...strong, very...disturbingly likable...*flip, you know, its times like these which makes me think i may just be masochistic lol!* ok, moving along, this was real good work, different to what im usually accustomed to but still, vey cool. keep it up, kudos!

O...great emotion involved, nice style. *sigh* *such a masochist at heart* x] Very awesomely-spastic lines:
"Poison pushing me down,
My exit is to drown,
Suffocate me."
I feel like I need to be abused now... ._o
-Arii