K, hands are still used to measure horses, and one hand is a unit of measurement, not the actual length of your hand. A hand is four inches. For further reference. Oh, and I loved this chapter! Is it really Graciela? I hope it is. That'd be awesome! Yay! ~Lady Merlin

Ooh, I like the plot you're setting up. One thing, though. I thought that Miguel didn't want to go in the house. So why is the door "welcoming?" I'd change it to, I dunno, "Foreboding" or something like that. It sets the reluctant mood better. Otherwise I loved it! ~Lady Merlin

Oh, nice beginning. Very inersting. Really caught my eye. Keep going. Yay! ~Lady Merlin

I like it alot! It's really good!

*Tacklepouncehug* HI! I finally got around to reading your story. Can you guess who this is? I like it so far :D It sounds really good, and I hope you update soon!
*swoon* Miguel sounds hot :D hehehe...not as hot as Shawn, my crush at the moment, but still :) I'll tty soon k?
*huggies*
-SHANdow lurker..(ehehe)

ya i liked it i hope u review soon!
namrie

you have a lot to answer for

This is interesting,update soon!

Those pirates are so cruel! How could they do that!

yay u added more even tho it was a while ago i really like it! add sum more please!

This sounds really good. I want to see how the two meet up again. At least, from your summary I'm assuming they do meet up again. This was well-written and like it's going to be a really good story. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what the next chapter's about.

Very cool! I like it!

^^ Hmm, like the other reveiwer said, he did seem a little willing tro join them. And I don't think that the pirates would have reveiled themselves quite like that.

But other than that, I liked it^^ And I usually don't like Pirate-related things. (Other than Pirates of the Carrabean (sp?) of course... M, Johnny Depp in black eye liner. Yummy.) Well, keep up the good work. Ja ne!

Gir-chan

I haven't been on in soo long, and seemingly the site won't let me log on.

i think my pen names three- days- grace
know me yet?

lol

I really like this story.

But, honestly, when miguel had to take his shirt off... you should have been a bit more detailed. (heheheheh)

Anyway, only thing a have for a flame.. is change the words around.. you kept on saying (cries), it could have changed to sobs, wails, (sp) i know.
just in other cases, remember.

It didn't really seem, miguel wasn't that.. mad or reluctant being a pirate. and leave his sister.

(oh, bad boy.) j/k...

remember in lotr when aragorn leaves eowyn in the return of the king... and something like this.


- "Nay, lady," he said. and taking her hand he raised her. Then kissed her hand, and sprand into the saddle, and rode away, and did not look back; and only those that who knew him well and-
(IMPORTANT PART)
were near to him saw the pain that he bore."

don't hate me... i had to include lotr.. lol. Ofcourse you'd use different purpose and wording. and stuff... for future chapters. Update soon! very very soon.

(- Passing of the grey company, p.59)


-j.l.s

next time, it'll only be l.s i like that better. lol..