this fic reminds me of the lit text we studied in sec 2, remember "Our Town"? emily died and she wanted to go back... when she saw the images of the past den she started crying and saying that pple should treasure they life more? something like that... yeah, so it's kindda similar to this fic.the style is completely you again... i like the part abt the Ultimate and the cherry and cream part.=) can see you put in lotsa effort in this fic... very depressing tho i still prefer Leave.=) thought that the fic shouldnt end there, what happens to blaze? write on...

what's wrong with the word?

rather bitter then... right.
touching. =) its sad... its true. only you know best. then?

hope there's a continuation... well. =)

WHY IS IT STRAIGHT?! anyway, another-word-for-sweet. real, it is.
miya: it's not very lar, stupid wada. and you said it's not too. it's TRAUMATIC. what kind of relationship is that?!?! it's not yaoi!! this hor, if you sub a weak uke into the girl, will be super nice yaoi already.
wada: sad to say...i agree.