'Memory is a slideshow of life,One tainted picture after another,Compensates a world yet to expose...'

Definitely the best stanza. Brilliant piece though, I loved this. Thank-you.

great piece... i love the 2nd stanza.

wonderful piece! well written, deep, i like it. great job! keep on writing!

Wow, another awesome one! Great job

Cool!
I guess I sometimes feel like that as I lie down...

I just like the 'wild' feeling about this poem. But I know fantasizing places won't help...sigh.

*smiles* That is a really good poem! It is savage yet gentle like a heartbeat...

- Crucified Sanctity -

Wow...the imagery, the involvwement...The tone of this poem seemed very quiet, like a murmer, but it draws the reader in immediately...can't say anything bad about it. Wonderful!

Beautiful...I had the vivid sensation of walking barefoot, through a pine forest in the twilight, wrapped in a long white sheet with lots of makeup on and a dark quest in my heart...zoiks !
See, that's what good poetry does - it puts such a strong picture in your head that it shouldn't make sense. As if I ever do...
ELise

Fantastic piece... Great work.

Keep writing.