very good!!you've captured the emotions of an ordinary crush..most girls can actually relate to this..a good writer can turn out something magical out of ordinary.. =)
i'm reading your two other pieces(books/works..whatever you call them) so maybe..this wouldn't be the last of my reviews..
anyway, thank you for your review!!*smiles*...it means a lot to me..i'm overjoyed..

WAY TO GO GIRL! I don't have time to read all of your postings yet, but I shall when I get off work. I copied them and sent them all to my e-mail address including the one you were getting rid of.
LYLAS!

This is so great. So true... I don't understand why you should have self-esteem probs, because you are awesome! (Yes I read your profile and I've read Elaina Hays's stories, they rock, and Emily West sounds familiar too, I'm sure I've read hers too.) Anyway.. this just captures the emotion that yes many people go through every day. I do too, it just kills. This is really great.

Woah. That was cool. And so very realistic! Thats like...my life in three paragraphs!! lol! It would be cool to read more of these!

ok, I have few comments.
1) As a math teacher myself, I have to say "shame shame" for not paying attention. Math is wonderful, and don't forget it. It will save your life one day!

2) I love how you perfectly capture the obsessive nature of a teenage crush. I had several myself when I was your age. They are what get us up in the mornings, and send us to bed dreaming at night.

3) As the older, wiser, and sometimes boring cousin, I must caution you. There is a reason it is called a crush...you are usually the one to be crushed. These feelings we girls love to write and read about are wonderful in their own right. BUT the best kind of love is the one that is your best friend. This can only develop over time...lots of time, and usually turmoil. That kind of love is the stuff dreams are made of.

Hum...well all I can say is GO FOR IT! Like I told u before u can do it! I believe in u...if u like him this much u should just do it. Remember, just pretend I am there rooting u on!LOL!;)

I liked this piece very much. It brought back memories of high school. Most of all I liked the fact that it was short and sweet. I'm always envious of those who can write a great one shot. I can't do it! I don't have any criticism on this one.

-applauds- Very nice. You can really feel how nervous the speaker is about approaching her crush. ^^